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The One Lily Keep me grounded, dear brother,
and lead me to your special yellow place
so that you and I can dance merrily again
among the petals of our precious lily,
where life is destined to mean nothing
and all our joy is soon dead.

You and I, we're dead
like last month's buried infant brother
who only lived to enjoy the beauty of nothing
and screamed just once at this place
before he too smelled of a lily
and never shed a tear again.

Yesterday I dreamed of dieing again
but tomorrow, like today, I am dead
with a single, innocent lily
held close to your heart, my brother,
and now I will no longer place
such blind faith in so much nothin

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A lot of people have been waiting for me to finish and submit this story-- I hope it's not a disapointment. I wanted to write an erotic story that wouldn't be what people would expect to read. Plus, I've always tried to be a very honest writer.

I don't write a lot of prose, so I'm really looking forward to getting feedback on this one. It was fun to write and I hope it'll be fun to read too. If you like it, great. If you don't, I want to get some suggestions to fix it.

Enjoy!!!

Amy

Edit: I changed the bracketed paragraph in the middle to something I think fits a little better.
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~EonOrteaShadowmaster Oct 21, 2010  Student Writer
An impressive little piece of work. Well written.

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~kuumakana95 Oct 1, 2010
incredible, very passionet yet so innocent the way you joke and giggle with eatch other
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Mood: Love ~kuumakana95 Oct 1, 2010
incredible, very passionet yet so innocent the way you joke and giggle with eatch other
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Mood: Joy ~ericasilber Nov 1, 2009
like an empress who had conquored a mighty kingdom... wonderful. i love that feeling but have never been able to express it
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`Lady-Blue Nov 2, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
thanks :)

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*Between-Borderlines Oct 27, 2009
This is just absolutely awesome, such a completely different perspective I've never seen or heard before! Loved it!
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`Lady-Blue Oct 28, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks! I'm always amazed at how much attention this piece still gets despite how old it is. :P

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!pookychan Oct 25, 2009
I like this :)

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~darkness-in-light627 May 24, 2009
haha, you describe the thought of the girl perfectly when he falls !! ^^
this is really good, not what is generally expected, and at the same time, erotic, but cute !!

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`Lady-Blue May 24, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks! This was written soooo long ago that I'm surprised people are still finding it. :P

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