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A lot of people have been waiting for me to finish and submit this story-- I hope it's not a disapointment. I wanted to write an erotic story that wouldn't be what people would expect to read. Plus, I've always tried to be a very honest writer.
I don't write a lot of prose, so I'm really looking forward to getting feedback on this one. It was fun to write and I hope it'll be fun to read too. If you like it, great. If you don't, I want to get some suggestions to fix it.
Enjoy!!!
Amy
Edit: I changed the bracketed paragraph in the middle to something I think fits a little better.
I don't write a lot of prose, so I'm really looking forward to getting feedback on this one. It was fun to write and I hope it'll be fun to read too. If you like it, great. If you don't, I want to get some suggestions to fix it.
Enjoy!!!
Amy
Edit: I changed the bracketed paragraph in the middle to something I think fits a little better.
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